the Unalone and Unknown

In what can only be described as a very 2013 article for The Atlantic, then-staff writer Michelle Willens, nominally writing about “chauvinist king of the stage, David Mamet,” explores the notion of whether or not male writers can pen female characters with any finesse, depth or dimension. Willens sort of punts on coming down on the any particular side, advocating for the absolutely necessary increase gender parity in the authorial space and then quoting the literary critic Sarah Seltzer, who says, “the attempt at understanding, empathy, and inhabiting the soul of someone whose life experience is not ours, helps us grow as writers, and people too.” Willens’ question is one I have considered often over the past half-decade as I’ve reexamined some of my favorite novels – I laughed again, sadly, in re-reading her article, at the line “Where are the vivid, realistic and rounded portrayals of women in Roth, Bellow, Updike?” – and it has been at the forefront of my mind as we’ve read Faulkner’s work this semester. One need only google “Faulkner and Women” to see that there is a veritable buffet of criticism on the subject, the intersection of Yoknapatawpha scholarship and Academic Feminism being an apparently robust crossing. Our pal Bill may not have a ‘woman problem’ on the magnitude of say Mamet or Mailer, but neither would his novels – the three we’ve read anyway – pass the Bechdel Test. Many of female characters in Faulkner’s work are peripheral at best, appended with harsh physical descriptors, and played as a sort of two-dimensional character of either neurosis (Caroline Compson’s affliction in TSAF), histrionic piety (Cora Tull in AILD), judgement (Martha, described as a “gray woman with a cold, harsh, irascible face” in LIA), or, most often, gossip (Cora Tull again, among many, many others). Addie, As I Lay Dying’s titular matriarch, is one of the few exceptions, but in many ways her narrative functions as a foil to those of her predominantly male kin, and it would be a stretch to call Faulkner’s time in her head a ‘sympathetic portrait’. And yet, in reading Light in August, which represents Faulkner’s most direct attempt to plumb deeper into the experience of racism in the south, and in to central non-white characters, I was struck most not by the psychological portrait of Joe Christmas, but by the familiar character whose narrative bookends the novel, one of Faulkner’s most consistent motifs: a young woman, pregnant and unwed.

What are we to make of the persistence of this archetype in Faulkner’s work? And by taking up their narrative mantle, does the author do this trio (Caddie, Dewey Dell, Lena) any more justice, provide a more dimensional study, than his other female characters? It’s worth pondering. On the one hand one could argue it’s a mark against Faulkner that he lacks the imagination to saddle these young women with any other problem than this pending “unaloneness”, but taken side by side the differences between them provide a way to read Faulkner’s attempts to “inhabit the soul.” In fact, if you probe the difference between the girls, and read through a lens of class dialectic, their parallel plight could be read as a polemic on the limited means available to each. It’s interesting, too, to track across the three novels Faulkner’s growing comfort at spending time in the narrative space of these women. Caddie Compson is in many ways the most self-aware and empowered of the three (the highest borne and educated, as well) and yet we are deprived entirely of her narrative within TSAF. This may well be by design – that profound lack doing more to illuminate the insufficiencies of the narratives of her brothers – but it could also be that Faulkner was not yet ready to attempt such understanding or to inhabit so complex a character, one he himself professed to hold strong emotions toward. By that rubric, Dewey Dell represents baby-steps (a horrible pun!) in the right direction. She has a less sure grasp than Caddie on what little agency she possesses — indeed, she is heartbreakingly resigned, even as she knows she’s being abused, in the last third of the novel – but she is nearly as self-aware. The time we spend inside of her narrative is marked by a distinct mixture of her mother’s anger as the pronounced failures of the men around her, and her brother Darl’s near-spiritual dreaminess. Her narrative holds secrets and any attendant shallowness reads as a specific character trait and not just a lazy signifier of her sex. It’s worth noting here that the adjectives Faulkner uses to these young women (I mean her name is DEWEY Dell) are often “bright” and “warm”, in laughable contrast to his other female sketches of matronly utility. Which brings us to Lena Grove – described no less than 1,500 times as “serene”, as well as “calm”, “warm” and “detached without being bemused” – who in class and disposition falls somewhere between Dewey Dell and Caddie.

Lena’s narrative is defined largely by her naivete and childlike sense of wonder – another knock on Faulkner’s limited imagination here could be his insistent fetishization of a Madonna-like innocence, even in those in possession of carnal knowledge – but is also charmingly idiosyncratic. From the opening pages as she muses on her distance from Doane’s Mill to her yen for the sardines, there is a alluring peculiarity to Lena, even as she appears foolish in her naked class aspirations, or hopeless in her search for Burch, that feel lived in, wholly hers. I was astonished by the many moments in her narrative that held echoes of the future: she asks her father to stop the wagon outside of town and let her walk unaccompanied in the belief that “the people who saw her and who she passed on foot would believe that she lived in the town too,” just as Greta Gerwig’s Lady Bird asks her father to let her walk the final blocks to the private school she attends on scholarship; the window in her lean-to that she sneaks in and out of recalls Juliet as much as it presages Lux Lisbon in The Virgin Suicides (…both written by men, it may be worth noting; Shakespeare gets a pass from most critics as some of his most enduring characters are singular females–Team Rosalind forever!!!–though Eugenidies falls under fire from Willens for The Marriage Plot). All of which is to say, there’s a growing boldness in Faulkner’s work as he grows more comfortable inhabiting these female characters – even if it’s only the young objects of desire to whom he affords this designation. It’s worth noting that though it may not have the immediate formal daring of TSAF and AILD, Light in August is the most structurally assured of the three and is crucially bookended with Lena’s narrative.

Carolyn Porter, in her biography of Faulkner, points to Light in August as marking Faulkner’s “move from a single, nuclear family as the focalizing subject of the story to an array of families, both present and past, set within a densely textured culture,” and both she and Avak Hasratian use the phrase “Human Community” to define the larger preoccupation that overtakes his career in its later stages. It says something, then, that our entrée into this new phase in his novels – engaging with broader mechanisms to interrogate the tarnished Soul of the American South, the twinned violence of Masculinity and Misogyny, and our central racial trauma – is not a male proxy for Faulkner but is the solitary young woman at a literal crossroads. I’m not sure how much weight to afford it – like Willens I shall punt! – but there’s something admirable in Faulkner’s naked attempts to, as Michael Gorra puts it in The Saddest Words “[become] better than he was…when writing fiction,” by “[thinking] his way into other people”. It’s fascinating to mark the progress and watch the wheels turn.

Falkner’s women reinforce patriarchal femininity

In Light In August we’re introduced initially to Lena Grove, a pregnant woman walking her way to a man who abandoned her. While Lena literally relies on the kindness of strangers those strangers seem primarily to be men. Armstid, for example, give Lena a ride and a place to sleep for the night however his wife, who did not oppose to her staying there, is incredibly dissmissive of Lena, essentially paying her to leave in the form of giving her the egg money. While giving Lena money is a kind act Armstid’s wife does not do it out of a sense of true compassion, it is a pitiable act to her. This is not the only passive aggressive act, Mrs. Armstid also makes breakfast for Lena, as early as she can, but does not sit with her to eat it or even see her off. She is in this scene attempting to run Lena off in a societally acceptable way. Lena is a wronged and yet not loved person to her for Lena had some agency in ‘getting herself pregnant’. To Mrs. Armstid Lena has violated the rules of femininity by both getting pregnant out of wedlock and by walking away from her family toward the man that abandoned her. This is not the way a woman should be according to the society Faulkner describes. Lena is at once pitied by the men for being wronged and hated by the women for doing some of the ‘wronging.’ Mrs. Armstid has internalized the patriarchal ideas of femininity to the point that she, not her husband, has become an enforcer of what it is to be a proper woman in society. Armstid reminisces on this a bit, on page 14 thinking “But thats the woman of it. Her own self one of the first ones to cut the ground from under a sister woman… she don’t care nothing about womenfolks.” Armstid thinks that Lena is the one who has betrayed femininity, a sentiment his wife shares in her actions and interrogations of Lena. They are members of ‘proper’ gendered society and Lena is an unfortunate outlier.

Mrs. Armstid is not alone in this, the women of the church react the same way to Hightowers wife when she violates their code of what it is to be a pastors wife. Their initial reactions to both Hightower and his wife are suspicious however she is the initial target of their gossip and ill will. When she does not show up to church they gossip, when she is spotted in Memphis they gossip, when she evetually comes back they gossip. Any action that she takes is met with the chagrin of the women. They are the ones who leave the church after Mrs. Hightower is killed in the hotel, they are the ones who come over unannounced to see and observe and gather intelligence about the Hightower’s lives to spread around or over exagerate in retellings. They are the enforcers of what is proper patriarchal society. So, as Armstid puts it, they “cut the ground out from under a sister woman.”

medium-length entry for Yoknapedia guide (due 10/22)

You have your second entry in our encyclopedic guide to Faulkner’s Yoknapatawpha Co. next week. Note: since a lot of medium-length entries already exist for TSAF and AILD, you are free to substitute either three short entries or one normal blog post (on any topic you like). Here are some useful materials and guidelines:

  • the instructions for how to write the guide are here: scroll down to the “medium” section and be sure to read some of the examples I’ve linked to there from past students.
  • be sure to check the list of entries to shop for ideas and make sure you don’t duplicate someone else’s work. Since I’ve recently reconstructed the site, you should also check the list of entries on the site itself to make sure I haven’t missed something.
  • there are some good research aids on this links page.
  • when you’re finished writing, submit your copy via this Google Form (also on the syllabus). I’ll post it so you don’t have to sign on to yet another platform.
  • don’t forget to include images or other multimedia when appropriate!

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Shifts in time in AILD

In his article Time in Literature J. Hillis Miller discusses, how works of literature present the human experience of a specific lived time, and how these narratives use words to express the subjective experience of lived time. These narratives of course are numerous and varied as they reflect the diverse lived experiences in literature. Miller discusses several literary works including As I Lay Dying by William Faulkner. In this novel, Miller observes that the dialogue of almost all the characters is composed of “brief segments of internal monologue ascribed to one or another”. (Miller 93) “Human temporality, this mode of narration suggests, consists of blocks of language that register what is ‘out there’ from different temporal and spatial point. These articulations always exist in the present, even when consciousness/language is devoted to the act of remembering, even, as is sometimes the case of this novel, when they are enacted in the past rather than present tense and out of chronological order. Flashbacks and retracing of particular events from different perspectives produce a jagged, cubist rendering that suggests that any human event consists of the linguistic perspectives on it.” ( Miller 93) One example of this movement in time and in relation to space in the text can be seen when Jewel describes Cash’s actions and his ostensibly calloused attitude toward their mother’s imminent death. Jewel’s discontent can be clearly perceived when he says; “It’s because he stays out there, right under the window, hammering and sawing on that goddam box. Where she’s got to see him. ….See what a good one I am making for you. I told him to go somewhere else. I said Good God do you want to see her in it. It’s like when he was a little boy and she says if she had some fertilizer she would try to raise some flowers and he taken the bread pan and brought it back from the barn full of dung” ( AILD 14) As Miller mentions in his essay, Jewel’s language describes the present, his irritation with Cash’s insistence on making a coffin for his not so dead mother. Jewel’s language indicates his mother’s physical position in relation to him, and his brother. She cannot quite literally escape the saw dust, and this serves to highlight how cruel Cash’s present demeanor is, that he is determined to make this coffin so close to her body. Jewel also uses his present language to move back in time, and this flashback helps further reveal Cash’s personality. Cash proves to be quite literally minded; which can be seen when he returns with a bread pan full of dung after his mother requests fertilizer. This incident helps us understand Cash’s excessive practicality; his mother is dying, he has wood and a saw, so he is literally making her a coffin. The flashbacks or shifts in times and perspectives, help us create and re-create both the present and the past, which in turn informs our understanding of these narratives and their characters.

Addie’s rejection of societal conventions

Addie rejects many of the dominating societal conventions of her time, making her character complex. Addie has very little regard for the opinions, or expectations, others have of her. We see evidence of this, in Addie’s critique of Cora’s clearly judgmental attitude towards her. Cora says that Addie “had never been religious”. (AILD 166) Unlike Cora, Addie doesn’t care for the outward, ostensible, and apparent piety or Godliness, which seems to motivate some in her society. Addie cannot subscribe to a life of religious hypocrisy, a life of religious practices and traditions, in an effort to please others. Nor does Addie claim to accept the life of a martyr, constantly chastising herself for being an imperfect human, the way Cora does. Addie is aware of what it means to be human, she says; “My daily life is expiation of my sin”. (AILD 167) Addie isn’t in denial of human tendency, but she also believes in her own morality; her own set of ethics. Addie doesn’t care about conforming to the prescribed, and expected rules of societal conventions, specifically the ones that promote the pious southern religious woman. Addie also rejects the idealization of motherhood, and the seemingly wonderful joys associated with it. Addie doesn’t find joy in motherhood, and she’s not willing to give people the impression that it has offered her any personal fulfillment. She says; “Then I found that I had Darl. At first I would not believe it. Then I believed that I would kill Anse. It was as though he had tricked me, hidden within a word like within a paper screen and struck me in the back through it.” (AILD 172) Addie deeply resents becoming a mother to Darl, because she believes that she was deceived by Anse. This doesn’t sound like someone who is satisfied in her role as a mother, no matter how much Cora or others insist on her children being gifts from God. It’s clear Addie isn’t concerned with appearing to be happy in her role as mother, or in adhering to traditional religious conventions. Addie sees through the facade of the established societal conventions, the ostensible happiness or fulfillment of motherhood, and the “blessings” a life of piety can offer. It is evident that Addie has decided to see things for what they are, not some illusion others have created, and no one, not Cora, or even Whitfield with his reverential sermons can convince her otherwise.

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Darl’s Obscurities?

Classmates, I need some help. I’m trying to better understand Darl’s language within the humor of As I Lay Dying. Throughout his richly illustrative narrations are passages that surpass mere description and enter a realm of ‘excess.’ Each instance is ‘excessive’ to a different degree, on one end bearing a more coherent or ‘comprehensible’ relationship to the characters and their experiences that Darl describes and, on the other far end, capitulating to inscrutability – or so it seems to me. What I’m unsure of is whether the latter instances are in fact inscrutable or if I’m simply misunderstanding them. And if they are so obscure, did Faulkner write them this way intentionally to humorously convey something about Darl’s character, or are they earnest flourishes? 

The most prominent examples of Darl’s ‘excesses’ are in his descriptions of Jewel, at times grotesque (his skin shifting from red to green), surreal (his face becoming wood and eyes growing paler), and, when Jewel is interacting with the horse, sometimes arrhythmic and disjunctive. Many, perhaps all, of these moments have a kind of clarity. For example, Jewel’s wooden back might suggest his virility, or at least a virility that Darl perceives (he originally thought that Jewel was sneaking out to sleep with a woman, as we discussed in class last week). 

But there are also moments in which Darl’s language becomes so hyperbolic that Faulkner seems to have written them as humorously ironic gestures that hint at the limits of Darl’s narration. The first time we witness Jewel interacting with his horse, Darl describes Jewel moving “with the flashing limberness of a snake.” Then, in the following sentence, he describes Jewel’s body as “free, horizontal, whipping snake-limber” (12). Characters repeat themselves often throughout the book, and in this instance I wonder if Faulkner is poking a little fun at, or at least calling attention to, Darl’s penchant for the grandiose and symbolic.
 
Another moment potentially in the same vein: Cash and Vernon are finishing the coffin the night following Addie’s death. Pa stands with them outside in the rain, dithering around, being a nuisance. When Cash tells Pa to go back in the house, “Pa looks at him, his face streaming slowly. It is as though upon a face carved by a savage caricaturist a monstrous burlesque of all bereavement flowed” (78). The hyperbole of Darl’s vision of his father – whose face is a caricature AND a character in a burlesque, an object of savagery AND monstrosity – is then contrasted, perhaps downplayed, by the following paragraph, when Pa is once again wavering around, quietly mourning: “fall[ing] to shifting the planks, picking them up, laying them down again carefully, as though they are glass” (78). Is Darl’s exaggerated description sound or merely ridiculous?

Then there are moments of seemingly downright obscurity. The white road sign for New Hope Church, “wheels up like a motionless hand lifted above the profound desolation of the ocean” (108). Whose hand? God’s? Is this vision original or Biblical? (I couldn’t find it in the Bible.) Was the hand originally motionless or is it motionless to match the stillness of the sign?
 
Pa’s “humped silhouette partak[es] of that owl-like quality of awry-feathered, disgruntled outrage” (49). I’ll submit that owls have feathers that grow in different directions, but outrage is not a quality I’ve ever heard associated with them. Not just outrage, but “disgruntled outrage!” Why the redundancy? Is Faulkner idiosyncratically testing conventions of literary economy for emphasis or is he just ‘taking the piss,’ as the British say?
 
Or is he doing both, humorously limning the borders not just between subjectivity and objectivity, but of Darl’s subjective narration itself: between its potential to achieve a poetic, “ecstatic” truth (per Werner Herzog) vs. its susceptibility to failure, of failing to ‘land.’ Surely, Darl succeeds far more than he fails, which is why I’m wrestling with this question with such uncertainty.

I’ll close with a quote from Thomas Paine’s Age of Reason that I think brilliantly speaks to the topic at hand: “The sublime and the ridiculous are often so nearly related that it is difficult to class them separately. One step above the sublime makes the ridiculous, and one step above the ridiculous makes the sublime again.” 

Keening and Grief

Dewey Dell, the mourning woman who cannot cry. She keens when her mother’s soul leaves her body and cannot cry afterwards. Her grief is both overwhelming and numbing. As too powerful to cope with immediately she can only scream, then empty herself and feel nothing. The relationship Dewey Dell has with her baby is also the one she has with her grief, she is in the liminal space of aloneness and not-aloneness, of the pain of grief and overwhelming numbness. 

Keening is the action of wailing in grief for a dead person. It is a soporatic combination of singing and screaming meant to convey the deepest of despair. Deweys name is of celtic origin meaning ‘beloved’ so it follows that this would be her method of grief. Keening is both overwhelming and sudden, usually out of the keener’s control, a spontaneous melodic scream. After her mother has passed on however Dewey cannot cry, repeating it to herself like a mantra. The keening was her first expression to the grief of her mother’s death and the only one she allows herself to .

According to myth, keening was created by the Goddess Brigid from Irish Mythology to mourn her son who was killed in front of her. Keening became a tradition for Celtic funerals with a group of keeners often being hired to keen at funerals, the practice is still alive today, however not as common. It is an ingrained tradition in Celtic countries such as Ireland, Wales, and Scotland. The act of keening also shows some of the Bundred cultural background, perhaps Scottish, perhaps Welsh since this is Dewey’s first and only expression of grief.

Darl Has a Point

Darl is an intelligent character who is ostracized by a society that would burn witches if the lord told them to. The act of insanity for which Darl is sent off to an asylum is actually very reasonable compared to the entirely unreasonable quest the family is on. This journey is clearly beyond the Bundren family’s ability as seen by the perilous obstacles they encounter. The request for a poor family to travel for multiple days to bury someone a state away is absolutely unreasonable and impractical. The most extreme and tragic result of Addie’s request was the loss of Cash’s leg which was broken along the way and rotted until it was unusable. The family also had to trade a horse to acquire donkeys to cross the river, while not as severe of a consequence as Cash’s decaying leg, for a family living in poverty this is no small price as well. Seeing all of this unfold around him I am absolutely able to follow Darl’s logic in wanting the coffin gone so the family could be done with this terrible journey. ‘As I Lay Dying’ presents the Joker-esq question “Is he crazy or was it society that was crazy all along”. 

The premise that the society is crazy is prevalent in many parts of the novel. We see this with the characters’ many hypocrisies like the false pieties of Cora and Whitfield who present christian values but go on to lie, sin, and gossip. The novel’s satirical exaggeration of how incompetent and disconnected from society the family is, in examples like putting the body in the coffin incorrectly, also serve to paint the picture that the society Darl encompasses is crazy. 

The clearest case for the argument that burning down the barn was not only not insane, but not even truly perceived as insane by the family, was made by Cash. “It wasn’t nothing else to do. It was either send him to Jackson, or have Gillespie sue us.” (p232) Cash clearly states that the family is sending Darl to an institution solely to avoid repercussion for their actions and does not actually think Darl is insane. 

I do not think that Darl loses his mind at all. Burning the barn was impulsive and not thought through, but the decision to do so was rational. Wanting to end this perilous journey in which Cash’s leg was currently decaying, was a very practical desire.